moan..(my first ever foray into the world of erotic writing...i first wrote this about 6 years ago)

passion consumes u, restraint is not an issue
your inhibitions no longer exist, it starts with a kiss
drawn in by my eyes and trapped by my lips
you moan; soft, barely perceptible
your heart skips a beat, you pause to catch ur breath and catch my eye
you smile and the stars in your eyes pull me in to kiss the half moon of your lips
i pull you even closer, kiss your neck
you shudder as my fingers run down your back
my lips brush your collarbone
a louder moan escapes your lips
you cant resist what you're feeling
you just let the emotion take control
caught up in the moment, entranced by my touch
taking you on a journey you'll nevr forget
you're gettin wet, nipples erect
as i breathe; soft, warm onto your skin
touch my lips lightly to your belly, pull you in
inch by inch workin my way south til i reach your .....O
you've lost all control
momentum building, the sensation climbing
you cant contain it anymore, teeth grinding
you explode, the climax unlike anything you've ever felt
collapsing, exhausted, yet the orgasm doesnt seem to end...

...waking up from your sleep with shivers of pleasure
tremors over your entire body from the night before
immobilised because every move you make brings sweet painful ecstacy
your dreams are only of you laying next to me
your eyes glazed...you've lost all touch with reality as they rack your body continuously

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8 comments:

Tigeress said...

me 1st!

Tigeress said...

Na wa for dese ur x-rated poems. lol!
Good job Scribbles. :)

Qube The Wordsmith said...

second!!! ARrrg hw did u beat me to it eh Tigeress? R u stalkin him hmnn.....
Ok I digress it seems to me ur talent na from back e dey come...nice one bruv

Qube The Wordsmith said...

hey i'm one of ur top commenters!!!!

does dis mean i like erotica too much?

TDVA said...

third...sucks. nice poem.

Buttercup said...

It's getting hot in hurr..

Miss Lowlah said...

I felt my breathing getting progressively quicker as I read this. Your words do things to me... *not like Qube, but you dey trysmall SMF*

Abby said...

Wow, loved it....and thanks for visiting my blog...I'm following you now :)

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