There's something

...about the way she looks at me. I melt under her gaze. My heart does little flips, delirious from sheer delight.

My body tingles, my mind blanks. And my fingers create the words because my brain can dwell on nothing but her.

Watching her walk away after that goodnight kiss, bittersweet. Like liquorice. Her walk, confident and determined. I love the walk, hate the direction, bittersweet. Like liquorice.

The kiss itself, soft, sweet. Lips met lips for no longer than a second. But like a reminiscent dream come true I still feel lips, her lips on mine. I fear to speak for I would hate to lose the sensation. No LL tongue tricks for her lips must remain on mine.

I said I melt under her gaze. Any arrogance that lurks is gone. I am made bare under her stare. All forms of pretence evaporated. And I am naked before her. Will she take me as I am? The doubt returns. Am I worthy of her?

The same eyes that strip me clothe me. Arrogance discarded for assurance. The same gaze that melts me, warms me. Comforts me. I know that she accepts me. Bare and faulted as I am.

But where will this lead?

Again, time will tell

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23 comments:

*Abeni* said...

FIRSTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT!!!!!!!

*Abeni* said...

THIRDDDDDD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

blogoratti said...

Suspense eh...

blogoratti said...

Where is all this leading to Mr.
Answer me,lol*

*Abeni* said...

is this the church girl again?? I told you it will work out...I absolutely love that you melt under her gaze..any man that feels that way is worth keeping...that's what you call Good Woman Whipped!

RocNaija said...

"bittersweet... Like liquorice"Nice.. Dude got it bad..

Scarlet said...

yep sounds like you got it bad!
hope it workd out da way u want

cerberus said...

Cuántos puestos socio hoy? Ella suena como su kryptonite

scribble,me.free said...

Abeni...lol..nice 1. same girl, but whipped? I think not!

blogoratti...i dont know myself mate

Roc...maybe I do...and? lol

Scarlet...hope so too

cerberus...I'm not restricting any longer, I post as it hits me. And she just might be

NoLimit said...

Hold on a sec SMF, is this LOML or another being entirely?...lovely write up I must say!

Confessions of a London gal said...

Can you pls give a heads up when u are posting 2ce in one day??!!

Pschew!

*Slams door in annoyance*

Bibi said...

That sounds serious. Sounds like you're on th cliff of love. Will you fall? We'll see.

Confessions of a London gal said...

Scribbs...!!!

If you are not gonna be serious about her- BACK OFF NOW!!! STOP tasting her lips!!!

On the other hand- if you are serious...When are you gonna bring her to meet the family (aka ME?) Lol

Love, love, love, love, looooooove!

bumight said...

Scribbles is whipped! exciting!

Afrobabe said...

Lmao,i cant stop laughing at that penis and the brain song up there. Yes i sang it to the tune of pinky and the brain. Hahahaha

Nefertiti said...

Kryptonite! u don kiss am, abi dis na ur imagination? Either way, glad u took it outta church hehehehe.

Buttercup said...

Awww sweetness!

I hope it leads to where u want..

Qube The Wordsmith said...

Scribs sprung
She's gonna get himmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm

Dude this sounds more serious dan LOML..We're losin him!!!

mochahourglass said...

Alrighty..I've plowed through all your post. You're an excellent writer...very intriging..and a poet too? Goodness.

I'll just pretend you're referring to me in this post. LOL.

I'm following you ;)

BSNC said...

where is it leading to.. this ur suspense is too much oo

BSNC said...

wait did you post two times today..

LovePaprika said...

this is love oh!!!!

ibiluv said...

you fear to speak?????

...ur mouth go smell o if u keep it closed........lol

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