ebony beauty...lips pure..spread chocolate kisses
her soothing voice would cure this affliction
this love, this addiction, in addition
her skin, dark, clear, soft, firm, giving off
the aroma of passion, purely aphrodisiac
aphroditie, sovereign beauty, treat me, heal me
take me, feel me,
lift me, body soul and spirit, take me to cloud nine
using only ur lips, grace me with their supple kindness
engage me with intimate secrets, come into this secret place
i seek ur face, i want ur presence, in need of ur essence
possess me, let me possess you, undress you, let me bless you
lets take it slow, lets make it go all nite
let me show u me, show me you, tonite
let me show u how, letz do this now
letz share this elevation
letz have.... a conversation
double entendre
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BUMIGHTIZZZZLE IS BIZACKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!
um....clearly not for straight-out-of-bed reading for obvious reasons :-D
Have you been reading Amiri Baraka?????
Anybody say that to me or write that to me can have me anytime,
especiall loved the lines "engage me with intimate secrets, come into this secret place
i seek ur face, i want ur presence, in need of ur essence
possess me, let me possess you"
Sounds like a song
For some reason, I was reading this with hip hop beats in my head..
Rhymed like a rap tune..
Well written..
Roc, I so feel you on that. I was playing a soft hiphop beat in my head. Beautiful words!
I thot u were doing audio posts one time? This would be lovely as an audio post. What say u?
Reminds me of Jill Scott's "Easy Conversation"...very very nice Scri-bizzle..
You got me with this..
"...undress you, let me bless you"
Dude...nice...nice! I like...I like!!!
this one is rythme and blues.. nice.
hey! Its been a minute since you've posted a poem. Nice one! :)
Conversation??
Conversation??????
Damn!
Im sweating here.....sheesh!
Nice one scribbles...
hey Scribbles. I've been stalking i mean reading your blog for a month now and i just got the courage to leave a comment (Lindt dark chocolate at 2.56am will do that to you)
i love everything you write about, esp your Meet the Hunters series, though i keep waiting for the husband shag the nanny or something....guess as much as I wish for happy endings i don't expect to receive them (weird isn't it)
I love you obviously....i know i know i'll patiently wait in line for my turn
bumight actually, that depends on how u like to start your day :p
DannyB I haven't, should I have been? I'm gunna google him/her
Zena anytime you say? hehe, thanks
Roc I read it again after reading your comment and I could hear the hip hop beats. I'm going to have to do a proper recording of this over the specific beats i'm hearing :p...thanks
Neffie..funny I recorded an audio to it, but it wouldn't upload, then I re-listened to it and it didn't do it justice anyway, so I'm going to do a proper recording and put that up when its done
Mochismo Thanks Mo, I actually got myself with it, it didn't start out as a double entendre...just random scribbles, and then somewhere in the middle, a plot formed
Miss Enigma thanks lady :P
BSNC hehe is it?..thanks
Tigeress...thanks Tig
Brokeass hehe, i'm glad I was able to be of service...thanks
dizzale lol...thanks, your comments mean a lot.
The Meet the Hunters series was meant to be a story of happy endings, sort of an ode to the '80s when happy endings weren't regarded as "unrealistic". So (un)fortunately, I won't be writing a cheating husband/wife, heartbroken, family shattered addendum to it.
Thanks again, I love you too ;)
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