Written Aug2005, recorded Mar2007
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Forgive me, this recording is kinda rough around the edges. I did it in my bedroom.
Here are the words:
Godess, deep, dark chocolate being
Let me tell you about this Nubian Queen
Sweetness, rich, smooth like Godiva
Adam would give his whole left side to get beside her
she is desire personified
damned if I dont tell you about her smile
drive a grown man wild
wrapped up in lips incredible, almost edible man, style
so sweet you could almost eat...lips ample
like supple pillows to rest my lips on
her vibe is mellow
casually i approach her
naturally putting me on an unnatural high
how do i survive the temptation, the fascination
the infatuation with this ebony vixen
would you please listen as i tell you about this Nubian Queen
have you ever seen a beauty so pure, so sure in her confidence
consequently
making me sweat from the fire of desire
making me ache for the pain of summer rain
making me lick my lips as i tell you about this Nubian Queen
9 comments:
I'll say it loud and proud... FIRST!!!!!!!!
The music fits the piece... it puts me in mind of moonlight, rain and lovemaking... shadows, writhing bodies... the works.
damn you have a way with words. Nice!
wow...this is my first time here and you are great...i love poems like nothing else and u were great!!!!was that u?!i loved the words...i prefer rhymes but that blank verse with so much emotions?!wow!!!nice.
Scribbs!! Did you have to describe me to the whole world?!
Now everyone knows about me! Lol
Nice one...
lmao @ confessions
but seriously. damn.
"naturally putting me on an unnatural high.."
i like that.
x
nice one Scribbles.
really nice...d music n d words
Miss Lowlah...that's the response I was looking for :)
miss.fab...thanks
leggy...lol..thanks..great? modesty won't let me accept that title
Confessions...can you blame me? There's just some things ur struck by and can't be quiet about ;)
Dee Brighton...thanks hun
Tigeress...thanks Tig
simplidivine...thanks luv
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